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• 9 months ago Spirit1999 commented on Evil's Revenge. Chapter 9. Please comment only on my profile! >_<
  "Chapter 9
  I find a ride
  
  Once we were in the Conference House, we walked up to three guys. One was wearing a bright yellow suit that was so bright, it was hard to look at. He wore a yellow hat, long bright blond hair, yellow eyes(which were very strange), and a deep tan.
  The second wore a black suit and a black hat, it was very dark. His hair was long and black, and so were his eyes. He had a light tan.
  The third wore a flaming red suit, and a flaming red hat. His hair was a light black shade, his eyes were a sparkling green. His tan was between the other two, not too dark and not too light.
  Christy explained everything to them, they looked at me. So I ended up telling my whole story, which seemed to take forever compared to Christy’s story. When I finished, all of them were staring at me. The only one that didn’t seem to surprised was the third man.
  “If these stories are true,” explained the third man, “then you better get going. And you better pick three helpers,” he leaned forward.
  “I know I need Brock,” she looked at him.
  “I need to come! I just know I need to!” I stared at her, hoping for her to agree.
  “I, uh, you can come. But only if you can get us a ride.”
  “Get a ride! How the heck am I supposed to do that?!”
  “Your the genius,” she turned to Brock, “who else?”
  “Xavier,” I wasn’t sure why, but I felt that he was important to this trip.
  “Who’s Xavier?”
  “That guy in my story,” I looked at Brock hoping for help.
  “He said he’d be back soon, and that everyone will notice his arrival,” thankfully, Brock saw I needed back up.
  “Well, whether he shows up or not, I need to find a ride,” I glared at Christy and she just smirked, “I better get going.” I headed straight for the woods.
  “Only if you can find a ride,” I mimicked her words. I kicked at the ground, staring at it as I walked. When I looked up I saw a big black mustang, she was beautiful. She lifted her head and looked at me, she started walking my way. I slowly walked toward her. When we reached each other, I lifted my hand and ran it down the side of her beautiful head.
  I got a crazy idea, “Think you could give me and some friends a ride?” she moved her head up and down like she was saying yes, “alrighty then, let’s go.”
  I hopped on her back And she sped off, but she turned to the right of camp!
  “Uh, camp’s that way,” I gestured in camp’s direction.
  How many need a ride?
  “What?! Who’s there?!”
  Whoa! It’s just me! Ya know. The black horse...
  “Awesome! You can talk?”
  Only into your head... Campers have surrounded us. So, ya kind of sound stupid talking out loud...
  I thought for a moment, then I started thinking what I wanted to say, There is four of us, can you do it?
  I’m gunna need help... She charged off like a bolt of lightning. When she slowed there was another mustang, we walked closer to her.
  Can I talk to her too?
  Yeah, most likely. But there’s nothing you can call us because we don’t have names.
  Oh, I started thinking. Thinking in a way that she couldn’t hear me. She was very large(the largest I’ve ever seen, yes. I may live on a farm with mustangs and stallions. But she was maybe twice their size!). She had slick black fur, long mane and tail... What about Beauty? Or Black Beauty?
  Hmm, best name I’ve heard... So, yeah! That would be a great name!
  Awesome! So. If she doesn’t have a name, then how am I supposed to get her attention?
  Beauty reared up and whinnied and the other mustang looked our way, like that. She gave me, what looked like a smile.
  I slowly walked up to the other horse, I looked her up and down, she seemed to be doing the same to me. She was as large as Beauty, she had stormy gray fur, her tail and mane were between gray and black, and her eyes seemed to have a thunder storm going on in them. She looked like a small storm. Think you could help us?
  Well, what do you need?
  Me and my friends need a ride. There’s four of us and Beauty can’t carry all of us...
  Who’s Beauty?
  Her, I gestured Beauty’s way.
  You have a name? Congratulations!
  Beauty taped the ground with her hoof, Yes and thanks. She gave it to me!
  Oh! Can you give me one?
  I looked her up and down again, she still looked like a mini storm! How about Thunder? Since your the color of a storm and well, your eyes are like thunderstorms...
  I love it! Thanks!...
  yeah well we need to get going, so, you gunna help us or not? I looked at her. Hoping she would.
  Yes! Of course! You gave me a name! So I owe you. And it sounds kind of fun!
  All right! I hopped on Beauty’s back, let’s go!
  Then they struck. The campers jumped at us screaming their heads off with arrows pulled back and ready.
  “What the heck!?” I screamed over them and they quieted down, “what’s going on?!”
  “Get ready fellow campers! Keeps your bows and arrows ready!” they all did as this boy said, “your coming with us.”
  “Oh no I ain’t!” I looked around at them, “none of us!” I spread my arms, I let out a roar of anger. The campers and the boy seemed confused. I rolled my fingers and stiffened them, I thought of fog, storms, thunder, lightning, rain, anything that I could think of as storm related. I roared again and dark clouds rolled in faster than they should have, it started pouring down rain, thunder and lightning crackled in the sky. I held onto Beauty’s mane and she leaped over the campers with Thunder right behind her. She went the same way as before, she started going uphill. She kept getting faster, along with Thunder, they reached a cliff and jumped straight over. Beauty stayed a little higher than Thunder, I looked to the other side, the ground was coming fast! Something black spread on each side of Beauty, they were maybe forty to forty-five feet long. They started flapping and our fall slowed to a stop and we were soaring like eagles! They were wings! I saw Thunder had a pair also.
  “Your pegasi!? You could have told me that before you jumped off the cliff and scared me to death!”
  Well, we can’t be seen with our wings. The campers followed us up the hill and are looking around, we’ll have to land to the side of camp then ride on in. Oh, and can you tel this storm to go away?
  “Yeah sure,” I closed my eyes and imagined it to be a bright sunny day. When I opened my eyes, they hurt first of all, the sun was out and shining real brightly.
  That’s a lot better, Thunder flew in closer to us, now, where do we land?
  To the right of the camp.
  Okie dokie.
  They flew and landed beside camp, “You wanted a ride,” I murmured to myself, “then your gunna love this one. Come on!” I gave them a smile and we rode off to camp."
• 9 months ago Spirit1999 commented on Evil's Revenge. Chapter 8. Please comment only on my profile. >_<
  "Chapter 8
  I meet Christalia White
  
  Once we got my friends and the family to safety, Xavier started to head towards the hills.
  “Where are we going?”
  “You said you wanted me to take you to Christy.”
  “But this is the hills, and I thought her house....”
  “Hey. Didn’t someone tell you that Christy was gone?”
  “Yeah, but I guess I didn’t think much about it.”
  “Yeah well, not many people did. Her parents made it sound like it was no big deal. But I could sense the worry in there voices. I’ve known them for a while now. Well, her parents. So, why did you need to see her?” he looked around nervously.
  “I thought she might have an idea of what’s been happening. Since people keep thinking I’m Christy and all.” he grabbed my arm and turned me to a certain hill. When we got to the top I saw dozens of kids going different ways, hundreds of cabins, and a horse stable...
  “Hey Brock!” Xavier started jogging down the hill toward a boy that must have been Brock, “think you could put Chris here on your hands too?” Brock had ear length dirty blond hair, dark blue eyes and was wearing an old T-shirt and jeans.
  “Er, I already got Christy...”
  “That’s it!” I didn’t know how I looked, but I didn’t care, “you can take me to Christy White!”
  “Hey. Calm down,” I pierced my lips shut, Xavier turned back to Brock, “think you can? I promise I’ll be back soon.”
  “Oh, alright. I’m not sure I can handle them both but I can try,” he smiled at me, “has she been claimed?”
  “Actually, yes! Christopher and Christene. She barely made it here alive. Oh, and make sure no one knows I was here.”
  “Your gunna have to come back someday.”
  “Yeah? But they will see me when I come back,” he gave me a slight smile then charged back up the hill.
  Brock looked at me, “Well, you wanted to meet Christy? Lets go,” he turned and walked toward a cabin. He looked back, “ya coming?”
  I shook my head and jogged toward him, “Yeah, uh. Ready,” he opened the door and we walked in.
  I stood more in the shadows. I didn’t really want to be seen. Then a girl woke up and started talking to Brock, she must’ve been Christy. I could hear them, but I wasn’t really listening.
  Until I heard, “Chris. Come on over here, I want you to meet somebody,” Christy looked pretty annoyed. So I walked over to her naturally.
  “Hey, I’m Chris.” I looked her up and down. She had long shaggy blond hair, and bright sea blue eyes. A beat up T-shirt and jeans, tattered sneakers like mine, “are you going to introduce yourself?”
  “Um.”
  “Hey Um,” I gave her a smile.
  “My names not Um! Geez, give me a sec to talk!” dang! She was a little tempered(hey! Don’t hit me! You know you were!).
  “Ok then! Tell me your name.”
  “My name. It’s Christalia.”
  “Chris-ta-what?” man, that’s a strange name!
  “Christalia. Geez! Come on! Your a real daughter of Athena!”
  “Hey! It’s a name I’ve never heard of before! Cut me some slack!” she seemed mad or something! Not sure why...
  “Well, whatever. Brock, I need to talk to you!” she didn’t give him a choice. She grabbed him by the arm and lead him outside.
  “Come on,” he whispered to me then waved his hand for me to follow. So with no sound I followed them. When we got outside, I went under the cabin.
  Christy faced Brock, “Brock, it’s the dream! It said that I had to go.” she told him things like ‘Rise and show more power than understood’ and ‘That child has no weak point’ and blah blah blah.
  Then they got to saying, “Well, you’re not gunna ike this question, but, Chris. Do you think that Chris’s appearance just might have something to do with it?”
  “I don’t know, is it possible?” I could tell she didn’t want it to be.
  “Maybe.”
  “Well, that settles it. The three of us have to go to the Conference House>”
  “Three?”
  “What? You thought I didn’t see Chris sneak out behind us?”
  “Well, no.”
  “Well, I didn’t. I heard you whisper come on, then you waved your hand at her.”
  “Ok ok. Come on out Chris.”
  I slowly came out from under the cabin, watching Christy. Not sure what to think, “So. What’s next?”"
• 9 months ago Spirit1999 commented on Evil's Revenge. Chapter 7. Please, only comment on my profile. Please and Thnx. >_<
  "Chapter 7
  I bring the dead back to life
  
  When I woke, I was in a different hotel, not that I was in one before, but a different one that I checked into. There was a guy sitting at a table, writing something.
  “Why? Why did it have to happen so soon?” he wrote as he talked.
  I sat up and the bed creaked, the guy turned quickly and stared at me in amazement, “Your... your alive! But! That’s impossible!”
  “Thanks for the greeting, it’s good to see you too.” I filled my voice with as much sarcasm as I could. Especially sense he was pulling all his papers behind him, with no such luck. They said ‘Deaths of Innocent People’ and ‘Lives Taken from Evil’. Which none of the names seemed warm welcoming, “my friends! That family! Where are they?! Are they ok?!... Answer me!!” this time my voice rang out, the guy seemed startled by my words.
  “You. They. I don’t know.”
  “What do you mean you don’t know?!!” I jumped off of the bed and looked around hoping to find them. I saw a door and ran to it, the boy grabbed my arm and pulled me back. I glared at him and he released me arm.
  “Your. Your not in any condition to leave.” his voice wavered, but he stood up straight, cleared his voice and said, “You should be tired. Lie down and get some rest...”
  “No! I have to know where they are and if they’re ok!” I glared him in the eyes, “are you going to help me or not?”
  “I, I can’t. I wish I could. But I would get into trouble.” I looked at him more clearly. His ear length long brown hair, warm brown eyes, and his way of being nervous. Dang, he was a good one!
  “Uh, what’s your name by the way?”
  “Xavier.”
  “Xavier. You do look like an Xavier.”
  “Yeah? And what’s your name?”
  “Chris.”
  “Chris? Um, you wouldn’t happen to be related to Christy White. Would you?”
  “No! What is it with that?! I’m Chris! Chris Neil! Daughter of Christopher and Christene!” I shut my mouth and looked a his expression, which was priceless.
  “I was told I would meet a daughter of Christopher and Christene. And if I did, I was. I was,” he didn’t seem to want to finish his sentence, “I was supposed to kill her.” he looked down.
  “But you wouldn’t do that, right?”
  “They said that if I helped her, I, I would get killed myself.”
  “No! If you help me, you’ll live. But, if you try to kill me I’ll just get away and make it an obvious escape.”
  “I. Ok. I’m in.”
  “Great! Now. Would you please tell me where my friends are.”
  “Follow me.” he walked to the door I tried to get to earlier and opened it and we both went in, “you got lucky and lived, but I’m not sure if these people will.”
  “You’ve got to be kidding! They can’t die! They can’t!” I ran up between Jess and Jane, I studied their faces. They were pale, it didn’t look like they were breathing. None of them did. I ran up to Jaz and Lauren, they just laid there, not moving or talking. Their faces were as white as snow. I saw something move by Jaz, I touched her hand, I started to see color drain back into her. Her eyes fluttered open and stared at me in amazement.
  “Wha... What happened?” Jaz sounded like she lost her voice and barely got it back.
  “I’ll explain later,” I touched Lauren and her color came back. I ran to Jess and Jane. I touched them both. Clark, Billy, Ryan, Katrina, Jake, I finished on Jessanoline. They all woke up and were alive!
  Xavier walked back in and dropped his papers and pen. He cried out with joy then stared at me, “How did you...?”
  I didn’t let him finish, “All right. You said you were on my side. Well lets get these people to safety and your going to take me to Christy White."
• 9 months ago Spirit1999 commented on Evil's Revenge. Chapter 6. Please comment on my profile :) Please and Thnx.
  "Chapter 6
  I learn to use the sky(and the sky learns to use me!)
  
  Hey. It’s Chris. Sorry it took so long for me to show up. But, ya no, it’s difficult when monsters are after you... Let’s just get back to the story. Shall we?
  Alright, so, where should we start from my view? Um, ok lets just start from the beginning.
  First of all, my friends and I were on vacation in the city(of course, we do live in the country). We got separated in the hotel, then four dudes started chasing me. I ran maybe two miles out of town with them on my heals at all times. I turned onto a gravel road and stayed in the middle, they stayed on the sides in the grass. I stopped quickly and they passed me, I turned left and ran straight into the maze(or corn field, for you city folk). I ran about thirteen rows in and stopped, I turned and watched the men come my way. One turned right and the other two went left, the last one just kept coming. I knew I was gunna get surrounded, but I stood my ground. I’d rather die fighting than running away. When all of them were close to me, I rapped myself up and spun around(you may think that’s stupid, but wait till you hear what happens). I started to spin really fast and air blew all four of them back onto their rears. I stopped with a big gust of wind and spread my arms out, I looked to the sky and let out a scream. Lightning flew from the sky just above them and blast all around me. They flew back unconscious, I jumped over one and ran at full speed toward the road(no! I don’t know how I did the lightning thing without freaking! Shut up Christy!) The next thing I knew, I had a face full of fat police stomach!
  “Whoa! Slow down there! What’s going on?!” the police guy stared at me and I backed away, “what’s your name kid?” I didn’t want to just pop out and say, “Hi ya! My names Chris! You gunna try and kill me too?” No!
  “Uh, well, my name is Christy...” come on! What’s a last name he would fall for? “Christy, um, Christy White?”
  “No way kid! They said you left two days ago! And they said you weren’t coming back anytime soon! C’mon kid, lets get you to your parents!”
  Then one of the guys that was chasing me got up and yelled, “You!” that’s when I realized that the police had surrounded them. They came in and started grabbing the men. Then the same guy shouted, “this isn’t over!” all four of them disappeared.
  “Well, let’s get out of here before they come back...”
  “How are we supposed to get back?”
  “With the cars, of course.”
  “Cars?” (oh don’t give me that look! I live in the country ten miles out of town, so no, I’ve never heard of a car).
  “Think I could just run?” (ok, yes, that sounds weird for a twelve years old girl to want to run two miles back into town after all that)
  “Uh, I guess. But if you ever get tired I’ll be there to give ya a ride.” Then they all loaded into the cars and took off, I watched hoping they just might leave me. But the fat one stopped and waved at me to come along, so I took off. I didn’t know how fast these things could get, so, I tried them. I kicked up speed and started to leave them in my dust, but they started to go faster. I kept getting faster until someone pulled in front of me with one of their ‘cars’. I tried to jump it but it was to late. I hit it, BANG! I was a little dazed, but I got over it. I stared at the dent I made, it was huge! Well, now these people wouldn’t forget me. Right? I knew that sounded crazy, but what else am I supposed to think when I was racing a bunch of police and ran into a car and dented it?
  I stood and told the lady, “I’m so sorry! I didn’t mean to!”
  The lady got out and I thought she was gunna slap me across the face for denting her car, but instead she said, “Oh my, I guess it’s ok. I was just as much of the cause as you were, I’m dearly sorry about that,” she did a slight smile toward me, but I could tell it was by force, “are you all right?”
  “Yeah I’m fine,” I looked back and saw the police were catching up with me. And if they saw this, well, I doubt they would still be in a good mood about finding me.
  The lady turned and looked the way I was looking, “Do you need a ride?”
  “Uh, no, it’s alright. I’ve already caused you enough trouble as it is.”
  “Oh, but it’s the least I could do. Please, let me help.”
  “Why are you doing this for me?”
  “Just get in the car and get down, I’ll get them off of your track,” so I did what she said. When the police got close, she pointed the opposite direction that I was gunna go.
  “Your pretty,” came a boy’s voice from behind. I looked back and saw four kids in a space clearly meant for only three. One boy that said that was about my age, maybe a year older? Identical girls about ten years old and a little boy, probably three... “I’m Clark, that’s Jess and Jane,” he gestured to the twins.
  “And that’s little Billy,” said the mother as she sat in the car, “I’m Jessanoline.” the thing that really scared me was that there was a knife tucked under the windshield. That’s when I understood. Something nobody, and I mean nobody knows, is that I always carry a knife with me. Strapped to my shorts, it was on my right hip. I unsheathed it and held it ready.
  “You seem like such a sweet girl,” Jessanoline cooed.
  “Pretty girl? What’s your name?” came Clark’s voice from the back.
  Without taking my eyes off of his mother I answered, “Chris.”
  “Isn’t that a boys name?”
  “No! I’m clearly a girl!”
  “Chris, where have I heard that name?” the lady looked out the side window, “you wouldn’t happen to be related to Christy White, would you?”
  “Who the heck is this Christy White gal everyone is talking about?!”
  “Why, she was a girl much like yourself.” I could tell she was trying to get on my good side.
  “If I was related to her. Don’t you think I would know who she is?”
  “I would think so.” I glanced at the knife, she followed my gaze, “oh my, I hope that didn’t scare you! It was a gift from my husband, it’s made of rubber. All rubber.” she picked it up and pulled the blade to one side, she let it go and it twirled really fast, back and forth.
  “Oh, yeah, it helps to know that,” I sheathed my knife and pulled my hand up.
  “So,” she put the rubber knife up and asked, “where too?”
  “It’s fine, I’m good. I can just walk.”
  “Oh, I’ll stop bugging. But your sure you’ll be ok walking?”
  “Yeah, I’m sure.” I got out of the car and looked around, “but, you think you know where this Christy White chick lives?”
  “Oh, why yes. Go left pass two houses then go right then it’ll be the third house on the left.”
  “K, thanks.” I took off running. Then I stopped and looked back, that family was watching me. I looked around them, I saw a weird cloud, I knew it was something bad!(oh, shut up, Christy. Yes, yes I have feelings for others but me. Now, would you shut up so I can finish telling the story? Thank you.) I ran back to them.
  “Hurry! Dangers on it’s way! Hurry! Get to safety!” the wind was picking up, and the Jessanoline’s car wouldn’t start.
  “Chris!” the lady was shouting to be heard, “the car won’t start! What do we do?!!” for once someone was asking me for guidance.
  “Get out! Get out of the car and run!” she opened her door and ran to Clark’s side, she got them out. I got Billy out, he was to little to run so I grabbed him and held him tightly. Jess started to blow away, Jane grabbed her and started to blow away too. Clark leaped up and pulled them down, but didn’t stay down for very long. I jumped up and grabbed his hand, he would have blushed if he wasn’t in a chance of dying. I hooked my foot to the car and looked for their mother, she was trying her best to hang onto the car.
  “Give it up daughter of Christopher!” came a deep echoing voice that reminded her of a dream she had before she came here on vacation, “Daughter of Christene, eh? Beauty shows it, but wisdom. Not so much!”
  Screaming came from the building, I looked up and saw my friends! Three demons were pointing spears at them, they were on the edge of the balcony! About to fall!
  “Your choice, Christalia!”
  He thinks I’m Christalia!? First Christy, and now Christalia!! No! They want to know who I am, fine! They’re gunna know who I am!
  But before I could tell them, a fire of light shone on my head. A cheetah, mostly black, running nonstop surrounded with fire! And another started to shine, a great white shark, that was moving with great speed, surrounded with gleaming blue ocean water.
  “Christene and Christopher have claimed for the second time!” said the deep voice, “and you have put up a good fight, but now, it’s time for you to be gone!...”
  Everything went black."
• 9 months ago Spirit1999 commented on Evil's Revenge. Chapter 5. Please comment only on my profile. >_< Please and Thnx.
  "Chapter 5
  I meet a new girl (But still, who the heck is she?!)
  
  After that, the last thing I needed was another dream. But I got what I didn’t want.
  “Your in for a big surprise!” a deep echoing voice said, “things will seem impossible. But one shall rise and show more power than it understood. Then a child of the same mother and father will rise on its weak spot to help. That child has no weak point and never tires, the child will be hard to work with but will come in handy. A guardian will show power like before, but will be disappointed by what turns out of the power, and who it really belongs to. What happens won’t be easy but will be worth it in the end, and it will save the world! Now! Wake up and hurry! There’s not much time left! And there’s no time to spare! Leave! Hurry! Go!...” the voice tailed off until there was nothing left.
  I woke up in a bed this time and actually fell off. Everyone stared at me, but I didn’t care. If my dream was important, well, I don’t know what might happen, but that’s why I need to talk to Brock!
  “Brock! Come on! I need to talk to you. now!”
  “Hang on. Whoa. Hold up! What’s wrong?”
  “Like I said before! I need to talk to you! In private.”
  “Hang on! There’s someone here for you to meet.” he gestured to a girl standing by the door, “Chris. Come on over here, I want you to meet somebody,” I gave Brock the come on look.
  She walked over like she’s done it hundreds of times.
  “Hey, I’m Chris.” she stared at me with her big chocolate brown eyes, “are you going to introduce yourself?”
  “Um,” yup, perfect way to introduce myself, I know.
  “Hey Um.” she smiled at me, showing her sparkling white teeth.
  “My names not Um! Geez, give me a sec to talk!” yeah, your probably thinking, ‘Wow! you guys really hit it off!’ wrong!
  “Ok then!” her voice rang out like my father’s, “tell me your name.”
  “My name. It’s Christalia.”
  “Chris-ta-what?”
  “Christalia. Geez! Come on! Your a real daughter of Athena!”
  “Hey! It’s a name I’ve never heard of before! Cut me some slack!”
  Now she really sounded like my dad. I looked at her more clearly. She had long glossy back hair that was messed up. Her eyes were a deep chocolate brown. Her clothes were all ripped up like she was attacked by a cougar, but she didn’t mind. She wore beat up old sneakers, and she was tall, maybe an inch or two taller than me. She was tan, and her voice rang out so loudly and clearly. Why did she remind me so much of my mom and dad?
  “Well, whatever. Brock, I need to talk to you!” this time I didn’t let him answer. I gripped his arm and pulled him outside. “Brock, it’s the dream! It said that I had to go.” I told him everything the voice told me.
  “Well, you’re not gunna like this question, but, Chris. Do you think that Chris’s appearance just might have something to do with it?” I stared at him, I didn’t want that to be but, it was possible.
  “I don’t know, is it possible?”
  “Maybe.”
  “Well, that settles it. The three of us have to go to the Conference House.”
  “Three?”
  “What? You thought I didn’t see Chris sneak out behind us?”
  “Well, no.”
  “Well, I didn’t. I heard you whisper come on, then you waved your hand at her.”
  “Ok ok. Come on out Chris.” she slowly immerged from under the cabin, she watched my every move.
  “So,” she said in a quiet voice like my mothers, weird!! “what’s next?”"
• 9 months ago Spirit1999 commented on Evil's Revenge. Chapter 4. Repeat, only comment on my profile. >_< Please and thank you.
  "Chapter 4
  We find out what’s after me
  
  “Is what your saying true?” asked the third man.
  “Yes, yes sir,” I’ve stammered everything I’ve said sense I woke up, “those were my parents, I know it!” He stared at me like I were crazy.
  “Do you even know who they are to everyone else?” he stared at me like I knew.
  “No, I don’t think so,” I didn’t stammer that time! Thank goodness, “could you tell me? Please?”
  “Sure. Your mother, Christene is it? She is a very powerful lady. She controls fire, heat, beauty...”
  “I thought beauty was Aphrodite?”
  “Yes, but this lady was much more beautiful. She controls heat and hotness which beat Aphrodite out. Nobody ever figured out how she came to be, just like Christopher. That question still remains a mystery, we try to trap them and get the answer, but they always get away! But, Christopher is a dark man in half with some coolness. He controls water, coldness, handsomeness... We still don’t know everything they can do, but no one wants to try to find out. They were forbidden years ago that they could never have children, but your proof enough that they didn’t listen. So. What are we supposed to do with her?” he looked at Brock, then back at me. He took a step toward me, water sprouted from his body, “this should be a mighty good fight.” he smiled at me with pleasure.
  “No!” Brock screamed but it was to late. The guy lunged at me, I didn’t know what to do so I tried to get some flames. They didn’t work, so I jumped to the side to avoid him. Too late, he grabbed me by the waist and brought me down. When he opened his mouth many rows of teeth showed, as sharp as needles. I didn’t want to find out how they felt. I screamed and the ground around me grew and knocked the guy away. It formed a shield around me, the man started beating on it. Then, the last thing I ever would have expected happened. Water flew from the drinking fountains and surrounded Brock, the man didn’t notice, the water seemed to creep up behind the man then surrounded him and drowned him then dropped him. I stared at Brock as the shield went down, he even seemed clueless. I looked at the unconscious man lying in the grass, I walked up to him. I didn’t want him hurt or cold, so I put my hand on his forehead and instantly he was warming up. His eyes fluttered open, he stared at me in disbelief.
  “You, you...”
  “You need to rest, your not in good shape,” I didn’t know how I knew this but I did, “I’ll help you in, that is, if you won’t try to kill me again.”
  “I... What do you mean?” he acted like he was blacked out for hours, “what happened?” I understood what might have happened, I knew I needed to get him inside. Then, I needed to talk to Brock, alone.
  After we got him inside safely, I pulled Brock behind the Conference House to talk.
  “What?”
  “I think I know what happened to him!”
  “What do you mean, he attacked you!”
  “I know, but it wasn’t him, I mean, it was him, but something was controlling him!”
  “What are you talking about?”
  “Remember how we learned in class how evil sometimes controlled one person to get to the other and destroy them?”
  “Yeah. It’s starting to make sense, but why would evil want to get you? I mean, your sweet, kind, nice, pretty...” I must’ve blushed because I’ve never heard someone say that to me or about me.
  “Thanks, but, I mean, since my parents were forbidden to have kids and they had me, don’t you think that could be a reason?”
  “Well, yeah, but,” his voice trailed off, “I don’t understand why evil would go after you for a small reason like that.”
  “It’s because it didn’t know what would come of a child of two mysterious people. It must not want to find out of the power to come.”
  “Power to come?”
  “Like how I did the fire thing and the ice and the air and the ground...”
  “Ok, ok. I get it. But how do we keep it from getting to you. It can’t through me, but...”
  “What do you mean ‘it can’t through me’?”
  “I was given this charm and was told that it was to keep evil out of me, at first I didn’t understand what they meant but now I do. So I’m not a choice.”
  “But it can get anyone else, like that man that you defeated,” my eyes grew wide as I remembered how Brock had controlled water, ”you have, you have a power! We figured out your power!”
  “Forget that for now, that’s not important right now. But I do have a question.”
  “And what’s that?”
  “How are we supposed to keep you safe?”"

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